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A quest to Meat a friend
Rowf Was sitting down on a big rock watching the sun set. For it was the same time everyone left the pack. Rowf sighed thinking that he could have done better to save his mother. he jumped off the rock he was sitting on and went into the cave inside the rock. Rowf went to sleep thinking of all the good times he had when he was with others. Rowf wakes up and says "i can't sleep now it feels like i got the weight of the world on my shoulders." Rowf looks at the stats and sees something that looks likes a wolf,he realizes it his mother,he closes his eyes and shakes his head. Then looks back at the stars and his mother isn't up there any more. "I must of be seeing things" he thinks to himself.
A Quest to Meet a friend
Rowf Was sitting down on a big rock watching the sun set, For it was the same time everyone left the pack. Rowf sighed thinking that he could have done better to save his mother. He jumped off the rock he was sitting on and went into the cave inside the rock. Rowf went to sleep thinking of all the good times he had when he was with others. Rowf woke up and said "I can't sleep now it feels like I have got the weight of the world on my shoulders." Rowf looked at the stars and saw something that looked like a wolf,he realized it his mother,he closed his eyes and shook his head. Then looked back at the stars and his mother isn't up there any more. "I must of be seeing things" he thought to himself.
I highlighted the errors in your post. :-)
Please try to keep it in past tense, for it makes it easier to follow the story line xD]]]]
